I met the editor yesterday and the meeting went well. I need to do some work on the central character, developing the character so the reader can better identify with them. Also, there is considerable confusion over two significant characters and a problem with authorial voice coming through and interrupting the viewpoint narrations. I will revise along the lines suggested and send the work back to the editor when it is completed.

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3 thoughts on “Promising Editing Meeting

  1. Thanks, jenni and Carol. I’m busy in the revision, concentrating on developing the context of the character’s life while building up the village atmosphere and dropping in the odd scary moment. I’m dealing with material in chunks (themes) rather than flittering from one idea to another. At present, I’m concentrating on just three of those themes. Still pretty difficult, though.

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