As I posted earlier, I’m currently revising the draft of a psychological thriller, this time by writing each chapter from a distinct viewpoint and concentrating on atmosphere. I think the editing is going okay, but there are still problems with one particular viewpoint. I’ve also found that adding new dialogue simply to bring out more on the character doesn’t always work and can give the whole thing a slight “screenwriting” feel. In short, less is probably best.
Part of the rewriting involves merging sections of the novel to avoid repetition, particularly where two scenes occur at the same location. For instance, two adult friends go to the pub on two occasions and there was two more scenes where one of the friends sleeps on the couch because he’s drunk too much beer and can’t drive. I’ve ended up merging the scenes so that the first pub visit is padded out with more atmosphere, which will mean having to completely write out one of the other scenes to avoid yet more repetition.
Back story plays an important role too and there are dated sections in the some of the chapters. Slightly confusing, perhaps, but that’s the best way of telling the story, I feel.
Elswhere, I’m still practising the repertoire I was working on at the start of the year: Grieg’s piano sonata in E minor, Chopin preludes and Liszt’s Hungarian Rhapsodies (5 and 12). The Czerny exercises really help with technique. (Plus, they’re tuneful and pleasant.) Also, the last four Chopin studies (second set) are excellent all round. I grew up with classical and rock music in the background, but I particularly enjoy playing piano works written in the Romantic Era.
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